Dear brother I am writing to you from New Zealand I hope this letter gives you good luck better than i. one of the boats bring us to New Zealand hit a rock it ripped a hole it the bow it sunk quicker than a rock. But all it's not lost we spotted some seals laying on the rocks. So how is home how is Mum? Is she ok? How is the honey ale? How is the job I pray this letter makes it to you
Your brother Martin.
Hi Miller,
ReplyDeleteThis is a really good letter. I think it was a great idea to ask how Mum was, it makes it sound like a real letter. I also enjoyed what you said about the boat sinking, what a great imagination!
It might be a good idea to tell your brother some more things about New Zealand. Have you met any people?
It is always very cool to see seals on the rocks, so I like how you have mentioned that.
I look forward to reading more of your blog.
Cheers,
Ruby.
Kia Ora Miller
ReplyDeleteMy name is Jolie and I go to Glen Innes School,I am also doing the summer Learning Journey which means that I can see more of your amazing work. I love your work. What was your favourite part about this activity? Why?. Keep up the great work.
Hi Miller
ReplyDeleteMy name is Allie and I am the cluster manager for our area Toki Pounamu. I cam and saw you at your school. You have made a really good start to the programme.
I really enjoyed reading your letter to your brother. Sounds like your trip to New Zealand was very eventful.
What did you do when the boat sank? How did you finish your journey?
It would be very scary making your way to a new country that you knew nothing about.
I would be worried about what I would find when I got there. If I would be able to survive on my own without my family.
Great work, I look forward to reading more of your posts over the summer.
Until next time
Allie :)
Hi Miller it's Jack B here from Paroa. This is relly cool, I like how you asked questions in your letter, check out my blog at paroagreyjackb.blogspot.co.nz
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